Rejection horror stories are like the campfire ghost stories told to other writers in hushed tones, perhaps over drinks at a hotel bar, but more likely over an email or instant message.
No, that’s not right. Unlike ghost stories, which seek to strike fear in the listeners, these horror stories are meant to make us feel better. The horror comes from what was rejected, how it was rejected, and who was rejected.
I think most writers, especially those just starting out, collect these stories to act as ward and charms against the fear of failure that so often plague us as the rejection letters mount, even those who have been writing for decades. Here are some of my favorites:
1. Ursula K. Le Guin’s famous rejection letter
The whole is so dry and airless, so lacking in pace, that whatever drama and excitement the novel might have had is entirely dissipated by what does seem, a great deal of the time
The book being rejected? The Left Hand of Darkness, a book that subsequently found a publisher and then went on to win the Nebula and the Hugo. Read the full rejection letter on Le Guin’s website.
2. J.K. Rowling’s long march to publication
Daughter Jessica was three-years-old when Joanne sent off her first finished manuscript. “Into the envelope it went, off it went and back came a very prompt response, saying ‘No, thank you.’ And then I got another rejection letter. “The funny thing is they didn’t upset me because I had that back-against-the-wall mentality. By this time, I was on a teaching course. I knew I was going to have incredibly limited time to write and I just thought, ‘Well, even if what you end up with is a file full of rejection letters, you know you tried.’ “The first agent sent me a letter back saying, ‘My client list is full’ – literally! “No ‘Dear Madam’ and no ‘Yours sincerely’, and if I sound like I bear a grudge, I do because I’d sent my manuscript in this beautiful plastic folder and I was broke and I didn’t have £5 to spend on a plastic folder and she sent it back without the folder and she wrote, ‘No, thank you.’ And with a handwritten PS, ‘The folder you sent would not fit in the envelope.’ And I just felt, ‘Well, buy bigger envelopes, then.’ I was furious.
Even the best-selling series in recent memory was rejected numerous times by agents and editors. The truth is, something’s greatness is not readily apparent. You just have to keep looking until you find someone who believes in your work as much as you do. And if you don’t believe in your work utterly, why are you even bothering to submit it?
3. Flowers for Algernon– Gold’s Rewrite Request
As part of the larger essay “Thus Our Words Unspoken” (1994), Malzberg relates the story (as told by Robert P. Mills) of how Daniel Keyes’s classic story (and one of the best SF stories of all time) “Flowers for Algernon” came to be published, and published in F&SF. It seems Keyes had submitted it to Horace Gold at Galaxy. Gold said he would publish it only if Keyes made one crucial change: that Charlie not end up an imbecile at the end of the story, but remain a genius. Keyes refused and trunked the story. Then, on a shared train ride with F&SF editor Mills, Mills asked Keyes for a story. Keyes thought immediately of “Flowers” and began to describe it to Mills. Mills found it interesting, asked to see the ms., and upon reading it wanted to publish it … with one change. Keyes, assuming the worst, begged Mills not to ask him to change the end of the story. Mills said no, that the change he wanted was to add a girlfriend for Charlie. Keyes, relieved, agreed to the change, and we all know the rest of the story.
Dave Truesdale recounts this story, which I think is a good parable about sticking to your vision. If you sacrifice your vision for the sake of being published, then what’s the point? Be persistent, but polite, but also willing to accept change suggestions from an editor that makes sense. Most of my stories have been made better by an editor. But I’ve also turned down rewrite requests that I didn’t feel were in-line with what I wanted to do. I lost money, but I felt better about myself. But good lord, could you imagine a Flowers that turned out the way Gold wanted? It would have been a travesty!
4. Brandon Sanderson– 13 Failed Novels
“I spent nine years trying to get published. During that time, I wrote thirteen novels. I eventually sold the sixth, Elantris, and got a contract from Tor for another trilogy after Elantris.”
Brandon Sanderson is the chosen one, literally, picked to finish the long-running and unfinished Wheel of Time series.The man wrote a baker’s dozen of novels before selling one! Can you really argue that sticking to it and being persistent doesn’t pay off in the face of that fact?
5. Just about Every Other Author You’ve Ever Heard Of
Stephen King’s Carrie was rejected for being “dystopian.” Rudyard #*(@ing Kipling was rejected and informed that he didn’t know how to use the English language! Dr. Suess? Too weird. H.G. Wells War of the Worlds? Too scary and dreadful.
If there’s a writer who has never once received a rejection, I haven’t met him or her. Everyone gets them. And they suck, I won’t deny it. I’m lax about submitting my work because they tend to ruin my day, but even still, I know I shouldn’t let them. They don’t mean much of anything beyond one editor’s (or maybe a couple), or an agent’s opinion. Have some faith in your work. Keep at it, trying to get better. One day, that rejection letter you’re expecting will turn out to be something entirely different.
Special thanks to John Joseph Adams for helping me find citations for some of these famous rejection stories.
The subject of writing is interesting to other writers and aspiring writers. They are not necessarily the readers you want, because there are not very many of them.
Crazy talk. There are millions of aspiring writers, and thus an industry to service them—several monthly magazines, a plethora of how-to books, seminars and conferences, over 100 degree-granting programs in the subject, etc.
Aspiring writers also tend to read more widely (and deeply) than non-aspirants. Aspiring writers are certainly a large audience worth cultivating.