Five Movies That Inspire Me To Write Better

I draw a lot of inspi­ra­tion from film.  I sup­pose it’s my gen­er­a­tion, that I’m influ­enced as much by the visual medi­ums of TV and cin­ema as I am the writ­ten word.  It’s eas­ier to become con­ver­sant in cin­ema than it is in lit­er­a­ture for the sim­ple fact that it takes less time to watch 100 great films than it does to read 100 great nov­els.  I envy writ­ers from the 19th cen­tury.  They had con­sid­er­ably less “canon” to digest.

Movies evoke mood won­der­fully for me, and it’s some­thing I often find I want to emu­late in my short fic­tion.  These are some movies that make me ache with a need to accom­plish for oth­ers what they did to me.

Amelie (2001)

image Directed by Jean-​​Pierre Jeunet, this film man­ages to cap­ture a tech­nochrome Paris that almost cer­tainly doesn’t exist.  It’s the pro­to­typ­i­cal slip­stream film to me.  It feels strange and won­der­ful, and from the very begin­ning in which we see a young Amelie, we’re made aware of how her world is very much not like ours.  It inter­sects in places… geo­graphic loca­tions, lit­er­ally, that you rec­og­nize if you’ve spent a lot of time in Paris. But they still seem some­how more alive, rich, than the reality.

The sound­track never fails to recre­ate a sense of whimsy in me when I lis­ten to it, a feel­ing of spin­ning in cir­cles like a sufi mys­tic, always spin­ning, on the edge of los­ing con­trol and col­laps­ing into fits of laughter.

It’s a love story too, a love story for misfits—as all char­ac­ters in Jeunet’s films are. This list could be entirely pop­u­lated with Jeunet films, honestly.

Whenever I think of strange cities pop­u­lated with peo­ple just a few degrees out of sync with nor­mal, I think of Amelie’s Paris.

O Brother Where Art Thou (2000)

image The Coen Brothers.  Sometimes, I think they’re the best work­ing cin­e­matog­ra­phers.  Sometimes they make films that leave me cold, and then they make a film like O Brother.

The Odyssey is my favorite epic. I’ve always iden­ti­fied more with Odysseus than any of the more tragic fig­ures of the Iliad, although I think per­haps the great­est descrip­tive phrase I’ve ever read is “the wine-​​dark sea.”   In the hands of lesser artists, retelling the Odyssey in a 1930s South would come across forced, unauthentic.

Oddly enough, this is another one with a bril­liant sound­track.  But it’s less evoca­tive of the feel­ing the movie puts me in.  Whenever I want to feel shame for my dia­logue, espe­cially comic pat­ter, I sim­ply put this one and and wal­low in it.  The Coen Brothers can write snappy dia­logue, sure, but the actors they cast into the roles really make it shine.

Everett is how I wish all my fast-​​talking char­ac­ters could sound like.

Jaws (1975)

image The movie that per­fected the art of the sum­mer block­buster and has rarely been sur­passed since.  This movie ter­ri­fied me as a kid, and I grew up in Kansas with­out ever hav­ing seen the ocean.  I was afraid to go near any body of water.  And when you think of just how rarely you see old Bruce, it’s pretty amaz­ing.  Of course, the film did tremen­dous eco­log­i­cal dam­age in cast­ing sharks in such a hor­rific role, but there’s not much we can do about it now.

The pac­ing in this one is just per­fect for me.  And it has what I think is prob­a­bly the great­est mono­logue of all time, deliv­ered by the late great Robert Shaw—you know exactly the mono­logue I’m talk­ing about:

You know the thing about a shark, he’s got…lifeless eyes, black eyes, like a doll’s eye. When he comes at ya, doesn’t seem to be livin’. Until he bites ya and those black eyes roll over white. And then, ah then you hear that ter­ri­ble high pitch screamin’ and the ocean turns red and spite of all the poundin’ and the hol­lerin’ they all come in and rip you to pieces.

The way that scene is wrapped in the rest of the movie reminds me of a Tootsie Pop.  A lit­tle bit­ter sweet wrapped in crunchy candy fun. And the cam­era tech­niques… I can watch on repeat that first major use of the Spielbergian zoom where Brody is on the beach and sees some­thing in the water.  It cap­tures that feel­ing of lean­ing for­ward in shock and fear, of bolt­ing upright at the real­iza­tion of some­thing ter­ri­ble.  Using the camera’s move­ments to evoke emo­tion is kind of like using sim­ple words to build up a mood with­out the reader catch­ing on.  I want to do that!

Hot Fuzz (2007)

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I’ve watched this movie a dozen times, and each time I notice some new trick of the script that blows me away.  Every early scene is chock full of easter eggs for later scenes—it’s absolutely a mas­ter­ful piece for demon­strat­ing fore­shad­ow­ing.  The dia­logue is used to great effect here.  The whole freak­ing first act is a giant gun on the mantle­piece, and holy shit does it go off in the finale.  And the way it toys with genre conventions—just bloody brilliant.

I wish I could write scene tran­si­tions like Edgar Wright directs in this film.  There scene where our heroes and drunk and headed to Danny Butterman’s place to watch films, and it cuts back and forth to the scene in the kitchen where the mur­der­ers are set­ting up a late night snack cracks me up and aston­ishes me every time.

A great use of a twist as well that doesn’t feel any­where near as cheap as some of the later M. Night Shamalayan movies.

I’m a sucker for just about any­thing Simon Pegg and Nick Frost do.   I am really look­ing for­ward to see­ing Paul, which sounds a bit off from the descrip­tions I’ve read, but I really trust Pegg as a writer after Spaced.  And it goes with­out say­ing that I’ll fol­low Edgar Wright into any film he’s even remotely attached to.  Scott Pilgrim really cemented his sta­tus as a top direc­tor for me.

Spirited Away (2001)

image I could once again prob­a­bly add any of the Miyazaki films to this list, but Spirited Away is one of my all-​​time favorite fan­tasy films.  The feel­ing of strange­ness and oth­er­word­li­ness it evokes is some­thing I try to cap­ture over and over again, and I’ve never done it to the level of my sat­is­fac­tion (I sup­pose I have a few more decades to get it right).

Part of the won­der for me here is that I’m not famil­iar with any of the source mate­ri­als Miyazaki draws on to cre­ate his spir­its, and so each one of them feels unique.  The coal sprites are just about the cutest damn thing ever animated.

And that train… I have dreams about that train.  I’ve rid­den on a train in the U.S. once and it was a thor­oughly unpleas­ant expe­ri­ence, but some­thing about the train in this movie is haunt­ing my imagination.

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There’s noth­ing remotely sci­en­tific about this list.  Ask me again tomor­row and I might draw out of mem­ory an entirely dif­fer­ent set of films.  Right now, I’m really ques­tion­ing whether I should have left Donnie Darko, my favorite sci­ence fic­tion film, off the list, but it’s late and I really want to get this blog post sched­uled, so I’m just going to have to leave my gush­ing over that one for another post.  And yes, I know this list is super-​​heavy with really recent films.  I’m not sure what that says about me, but I’m sure it’s some­thing unpleas­ant.  Let us not speak of it.

So what about you guys?  What movies inspire you to write bet­ter?  What flick­er­ing cel­lu­loid dreams do you want to evoke in your words?

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    1. Rob Darnell says:

      I was inspired by the Jason Bourne movies to write that kind of thing. I’ve since read Ludlum and my read­ing inter­est seems to be more in the thriller/​suspense area these days. Haven’t been read­ing much sci­ence fic­tion or fan­tasy, except for when I was an edi­tor for Hadley Rille Books and I recently gave that up so I’d have more time to write. At the moment I have five dif­fer­ent thriller nov­els out­lined and I’m in the process of writ­ing one of them.

    2. I’m not much of a films or tele­vi­sion buff, but I was deeply impressed when my ex got me to watch the first few series of Dexter. Now, the premise is daft, and when she explained it to me I nearly ducked out… but the writ­ing at every level — scene, episode and series arc — is incred­i­bly tight. There are no wasted moments, no slow filler episodes like so many other series seem to pad them­selves out with. There’s never any deus ex; you’re always fed the clues, but so care­fully that you only notice them when the rev­e­la­tion hits. The char­ac­ters are rounded, and each of them gets their own devel­op­ment path; even the minors change and deepen as things move onward. I’m still left a lit­tle cold by the premise now, and horror/​thriller stuff has never been my genre of choice, but the sheer crafts­man­ship of what I’ve seen of it (first three series) left me quite lit­er­ally in awe.

      Sons Of Anarchy comes close to the same exper­tise, but has a few slow episodes; that said, it’s a damned good retelling of Hamlet. And hey, any­one who gets Hank Rollins in to play a White Power thug with a (extremely skewed but con­sis­tent) con­science scores points in my book. ;)

      • Jeremiah Tolbert says:

        Both of those are shows I have on my list to watch even­tu­ally, espe­cially Dexter. They sound like excel­lently writ­ten stuff.

    3. The Philadelphia Story with Cary Grant, Katherine Hepburn and James Stewart. The dia­logue is razor sharp, the deliv­ery nigh on per­fect, and it’s Jimmy Stewart’s Oscar-​​winning per­for­mance as the frus­trated, prin­ci­pled writer, Macaulay (Mike) Connor that gets me every time I watch it. I guess it’s easy for me to iden­tify with him. You see, Connor really wants to write short sto­ries but has to work as a jour­nal­ist in order to make a liv­ing, and you can see that – despite his tough talk – it’s really eat­ing him up inside. He’s fac­ing the one dilemma every seri­ous writer faces sooner or later: how to bal­ance the need to write with the need to eat.

      Tracy: These sto­ries are beau­ti­ful. Why, Connor, they’re almost poetry.

      Mike: Don’t kid your­self. They are.

      Tracy: Tell me some­thing, will you? When you can do a thing like that book, how can you pos­si­bly do any­thing else?

      Mike: You may not believe this, but there are peo­ple that must earn their living.

      Tracy: Of course, but peo­ple buy books, don’t they?

      Mike: Not as long as there’s a library around.

      • Jeremiah Tolbert says:

        oh, hell yes. Excellent one. There’s a cou­ple of lines toward the very end between Grant and Stewart, some­thing about a hang­over, that can make me laugh every sin­gle time I watch it.

        It’s so rare they write dia­logue quite like in that movie. I may be wrong, but I believe it was a play before it was a movie.

    4. Brian Malow says:

      Great list, Jeremy. I own Amelie. Downloading a cou­ple oth­ers from your list now. Never saw Hot Fuzz (but I love Simon Pegg. Have you seen his series “Spaced”?)

      Here are a few of mine…

      The best of Woody Allen’s work, in par­tic­u­lar Annie Hall, which I think is just a bril­liant roman­tic com­edy — a great on-​​again, off-​​again rela­tion­ship story, pretty real­is­tic — told in a non­lin­ear fash­ion not unlike a stand up com­edy rou­tine, very stream of con­scious­ness. And then, to top it off, it’s loaded with awe­some jokes and crazy comedic devices that all serve the narrative.

      Also, watch Annie Hall some­time and notice how many scenes con­sist entirely of a sin­gle shot. There are quite a few — and they are all very dif­fer­ent from each other — some sim­ple, some with elab­o­rate move­ments and stag­ing. Impressive cin­e­matog­ra­phy that few peo­ple notice.

      Blade Runner. Every word that Rutger Hauer utters seems like poetry to me. Sean Young is one of the most tragic char­ac­ters in any­thing (to be told your whole life is a lie). Roy meet­ing his maker… one of the best scenes in cin­ema — dia­logue, cin­e­matog­ra­phy, char­ac­ter­i­za­tion, sub­plots, awesome.

      Adaptation. Very jeal­ous of this one. It had many of my ideas in it — exe­cuted bet­ter than I could’ve imag­ined them. Smart film. I love the way it all works together.

      • Jeremiah Tolbert says:

        Agreed. All three of those are fantastic.

        I love Spaced– I came to it after his movies, but we watch it semi-​​regularly around here. It’s like TV com­fort food. It’s start­ing to make me feel a bit old though.

        I really need to watch Annie Hall again. I haven’t seen that since I reviewed it for the col­lege news­pa­per in the late 90s.

    5. Hi Jeremiah,
      Love your blogs and site. I’m a writer/​editor just get­ting started with WordPress, blog­ging, etc.
      I just wanted to men­tion that “Cohen” broth­ers is spelled “Coen”. (The proof­reader in me won’t let me rest.…)
      I may be call­ing you for help with my site!
      Best,
      Arianne Pfoutz

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