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	<title>Comments on: To Rewrite or Not to Rewrite? That is the Flowchart.</title>
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		<title>By: Jeremiah Tolbert</title>
		<link>http://www.jeremiahtolbert.com/2009/08/to-rewrite-or-not-to-rewrite-that-is-the-flowchart/comment-page-1/#comment-223374</link>
		<dc:creator>Jeremiah Tolbert</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Jun 2010 16:25:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Jeremiah Tolbert</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeremiah Tolbert</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Jun 2010 16:18:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Twitted by Meanjin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Twitted by Meanjin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 Aug 2009 04:37:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Eden Tyler</title>
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		<dc:creator>Eden Tyler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Aug 2009 18:08:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve saved a copy of this, after being referred to it by Flash Me Magazine&#039;s blog.
I love having things laid out like that -- so helpful! Thanks for taking the time to make the flowchart and sharing it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I’ve saved a copy of this, after being referred to it by Flash Me Magazine’s blog.<br />
I love having things laid out like that — so helpful! Thanks for taking the time to make the flowchart and sharing it.</p>
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		<title>By: Merc</title>
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		<dc:creator>Merc</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Aug 2009 23:39:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great chart, thanks for sharing!</description>
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		<title>By: Jeremiah Tolbert</title>
		<link>http://www.jeremiahtolbert.com/2009/08/to-rewrite-or-not-to-rewrite-that-is-the-flowchart/comment-page-1/#comment-216944</link>
		<dc:creator>Jeremiah Tolbert</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Aug 2009 20:30:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sure, of course it&#039;s okay!  Glad it&#039;s helpful :)</description>
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		<title>By: Rie Sheridan Rose</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rie Sheridan Rose</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Aug 2009 20:28:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Printed out a copy (hope that&#039;s okay...) to keep near my desk so I will remember that sometimes a rewrite just doesn&#039;t help. :) 

And other times, it is just what you need to move forward.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Printed out a copy (hope that’s okay…) to keep near my desk so I will remember that sometimes a rewrite just doesn’t help. :) </p>
<p>And other times, it is just what you need to move forward.</p>
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		<title>By: cdthomas</title>
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		<dc:creator>cdthomas</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Aug 2009 21:50:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think it&#039;s helpful.</description>
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		<title>By: Jeremiah Tolbert</title>
		<link>http://www.jeremiahtolbert.com/2009/08/to-rewrite-or-not-to-rewrite-that-is-the-flowchart/comment-page-1/#comment-215687</link>
		<dc:creator>Jeremiah Tolbert</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Aug 2009 21:11:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good points, Matt.</description>
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		<title>By: Matthew Sanborn Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Matthew Sanborn Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Aug 2009 17:42:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>For me, there are two decisions after the rewrite. If I decide to do a rewrite, I&#039;ll save the original and do the rewrite as another document. Once the rewrite is done, I&#039;ll ask myself &quot;Do I like the story now?&quot; and &quot;Did I pull off the change that the editor is looking for?&quot;

Sometimes you get a story that you like even more. Sometimes you find that you&#039;ve broken or watered down your original intent.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For me, there are two decisions after the rewrite. If I decide to do a rewrite, I’ll save the original and do the rewrite as another document. Once the rewrite is done, I’ll ask myself “Do I like the story now?” and “Did I pull off the change that the editor is looking for?”</p>
<p>Sometimes you get a story that you like even more. Sometimes you find that you’ve broken or watered down your original intent.</p>
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