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Jason Stoddard is Wrong about Science Fiction

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Jason has a nice post up about the demands placed on science fiction writers who write believable near-future SF today.  You should read it.  I think he’s wrong, but you should read it.*

I think focusing on the science aspects of science fiction is missing the point.  Science fiction is fiction first, and only tangentially about science.  Some of my favorite SF tales arguably have zero science in them.  I’d even go so far as to say science fiction is just a genre of fiction with a set of tropes that sometimes involve science, or the future, but doesn’t always, and doesn’t have to.  But let’s focus on the idea of near-future SF.  It’s a small subset of what’s written, but it is a subset.

Jason says:

To write fully believable, near future science fiction today, you almost need to be voracious antisocial polymath, deeply conversant in half a dozen technical fields, as well as familiar with ongoing social, economic, and environmental change.

First of all, to have any kind off successful writing career, you need to be somewhat antisocial because you rarely make enough money to do it full time, which means you use leisure time to do it, and often a lot of leisure time, which means you won’t be seeing your friends much.  It’s a solitary pursuit for the most part.  But that’s not what I wanted to say about that quote.  This is:

I take exception to is the notion that you need to be deeply conversant in anything.  I think you just need to do research to the point where what you have to say doesn’t break the suspension of disbelief and I think that’s a long ways from being a polymath.   You don’t need to be an expert on anything but people.

One of the appeals to a certain kind of writer of SF is that they get to do research.  These writers sometimes have a tendency to inflict their research upon the reader whether it matters or not.  As I get older, I care a lot less about the believability of the science in my stories than I do about the actual story and the characters.  I was recently reading a nice space opera by a friend of mine, and as I was digging through info-term-dense paragraph after paragraph talking about technologies underlying starship mechanics and such, I thought–I have been conditioned to find this acceptable in a story, I kind of enjoy it because I am a big nerd, but I don’t think it makes the story any better.  Senswunda’s one thing–I dig that.  But I only care about the details so long as they relate to the core of the story, and a lot of times in this kind of SF, they don’t.  The Analog mafia might like that sort of thing, but I don’t.  I don’t need equations in my fiction, and I rarely find that they improve it.

I also don’t like my SF to be predicative.  I don’t like it to be realistic, necessarily.  Neither does most of the world.  Your science fiction does not need to be well-researched, and you do not need to be an expert on quantum mechanics to write science fiction.  In fact, I would argue that the more conversant you are in these details, and the more you force into your novel or story, the smaller your audience is.  Star Wars doesn’t trouble itself with the mechanics of FTL.  It’s pretty damned successful with audiences.

Jason concludes with a very nice zinger:

Otherwise, your fiction will soon read like that Golden Age lit, filled with spaceships manned by human calculators and spinning reels of tape.

That’s the universal failing of ALL near-future SF, no matter how well researched it is.  They couldn’t get it right when technology wasn’t accelerating as fast in the 50s, and near-future SF writers are probably not getting it right now either with things clipping along faster.  So why bother?  Getting it “right” is not the point.  It shouldn’t be about anything the now through the lens of tools that SF has developed.  You can say things about the future that you can’t say about the present. Projecting those comments onto the future gives you a little distance to say those things.  That’s the primary reason we set stuff in the future.  It might as well all be alternate history, or alternate universe stories. The inclusion of alt history in the SF greater genre just proves my point here.  You can’t write a What-If story without extrapolating from the present (or past).  It’s an examination of what the truth really is through the fiction of what wasn’t or what could be (a departure from the truth).

If you’re intimidated by the accelerating advance of the future, don’t let that stop you from writing SF.  You don’t have to write it that way.  Personally, I take great enjoyment in throwing reality out the window when I write my SF.    SF has only ever been about believability to a small subset of readers.  Believability in the context of tech, anyway.  It, like all literature, does revolve around the believability of human action and emotion, however.  Keep that in mind and you’ll write great fiction, and very few people will care about that other stuff. Nobody looks at the tech in 1984 and complains about it.

By now you should realize that I don’t really think Jason is wrong.  I just wrote that headline to get your attention so you could watch me hash out for myself what I think is important about science fiction.  Jason and everyone else who wants to can go about trying to master every field they want to include in their fiction, and try to make the near-future believable with multiple points of advancement. I applaud it.  A not-small number of people will read it and enjoy it, maybe including myself from time to time. They’ll almost certainly get something wrong and some  will bitch and moan about it too.  I just don’t find these kinds of stories very memorable.  You might get lucky and nail some prediction on the head and then become a footnote in history for having some foresight (see Arthur C. Clarke and the prediction/invention of satellites. We know he did it, but I couldn’t tell you in what story).  But you don’t need it to write good stories.

My opinion and approach? Forget all of that.  The core of a story is timeless, and none of that really matters.  Understand people before you understand quantum mechanics or network infrastructure.  That’ll take you much further in fiction than any other knowledge set.  Senswunda exists independently of prediction, and that is what matters to me.  If that makes me more of a fantasy writer than a SF writer, then so be it.

So no, Jason Stoddard is not really wrong.  He’s just wrong for me.  You can make up your own mind about what you think.

Comments

GLP

I think you’re right – fiction should be fiction, first and foremost.

Bluejack

Good response, Jeremiah.

I think Jason’s original point makes a number of unfortunate assumptions about science fiction, and while he does eventually reference “near-term science fiction,” that doesn’t come across as a clarifying thrust of the article.

Moreover: I’d be tempted to argue that the vibrant pace of creation by engineers, and the exciting evolution of theory under scientists makes the *present* writing of both near- and far- term science fiction an entirely open-ended proposition. Yes, Jason’s right, you need to be conversant with a lot of stuff in order to project in a manner plausible to the sophisticated reader, and even then your chances of getting right are somewhere near nil. But as you point out, they always have been.

However, I dare someone to say that there could be no new Arthur C. Clarke’s in science fiction, for there would surely be some brilliant, philosophically inclined imaginer come along to disprove it.

So, I see Jason’s point, and it’s valid in a certain domain, but given more thought I have to agree with your original tweet: It’s beside the point.

Jason Stoddard

Ha! I’m wrong about a *lot* of things. This may be one of them.

Jeremiah Tolbert

Your good nature regarding such things is why I felt comfortable with such an incendiary headline :) It’ll get us a lot of play in the SF/F blogs this week though if everyone things we’re mortal enemies ready to battle to the death over what SF is all about, haha!

Jason Stoddard

Ha, you don’t know what I’m plotting . . .

(Kidding, of course.)

And yeah, shame on me for perhaps not emphasizing enough that I’m talking about near-future science fiction, and that a “deep” understanding really means “enough to seem really, really smart at cocktail parties, but not enough to get a Ph.D or anything like that.”

The main thing (for me) is synthesis and believability. I don’t think we can linearly extrapolate any *single* change and end up with an enduring near-future scenario. I think we need to be aware of many changes so we can knit together a believable, enduring near future. If that’s what we want to write. I do a reasonable amount of near future (and alt history, and far future, and . . .) so maybe the blogpost is:

a. A way to encourage myself to keep up with all of these fields.
b. A very belated and oblique answer to Charles Stross’s post on the impossibility of writing near-future science fiction.

And yeah, to one of your excellent points: whatever you write, it should also be a damn good story in its own right.

steve davidson

Jeremiah, you took about one paragraph too long to say ‘hah! gotchya!’

As you succinctly pointed out, hard/good science crammed into a story is ‘not for you’. What we read and what we write comes down to personal taste – just as our definitions of science fiction do.

Your definition of science fiction is not my definition. For me, the ’science’ comes first in the equation. That might be the premise, or it might be chapter upon chapter of detailed engineering and physics regarding make-believe FTL drives.

Without the science first, it’s not science fiction. Maybe fantasy, maybe not even that, but most certainly not SF – near-term or otherwise.

I don’t know if you saw it, but OS Card was over at the B&N blog answering questions yesterday and he said, (paraphrasing) ‘there is no science fiction any more’.

Makes me wonder what he’s writing then. Makes me wonder what some all of the rest of you are planning on writing also.

The field (more often than not an American institution) has almost always been a mirror to our culture, and now it seems, even more so: the country is examining its purpose of being and trying to re-define exactly what it is, just as the genre has been doing for at least the past two years.

I already know what science fiction is (for me). No need to look into the mirror. I just wish the publishers would start printing some of it again…

(I closed with a provocation, just as you opened with one, lol.)

IGPNicki

Thank you! I’ve been getting a little tired of this talk of the lack of science in science fiction. In my view, those two words should have equal billing. Believe me, I hate it when the science is glossed over and makes no sense. But I don’t want it to be bogged down with details either, because that can seriously hurt the storytelling. Just for example, I love the Andromeda Strain, but for me, (and this is rare for me to say this) the movie was better than the book, because it didn’t get so bogged down with details. Besides, some of the fun is poking holes in the science. :)

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Mike Brotherton

I believe in the science, but I agree with a lot of this post. Reminds me of the posts about Charlie Stross I had a few months ago:

http://www.mikebrotherton.com/?p=834

Here’s the headline and opening, to which Charlie responded…

Why Charlie Stross is a Stupid Smart Person and Near-Future Science Fiction

October 1st, 2008

I posted a link yesterday to a Charlie Stross rant where he opened with:

We are living in interesting times; in fact, they’re so interesting that it is not currently possible to write near-future SF.

This is total bullshit.

The purpose of science fiction is not to accurately predict the future, and it is not necessary to do this in order to be able to write it.

Charlie is totally correct that it is next to impossible to accurately predict the future, but then he draws a ridiculous conclusion.

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